A trip to Ooty
We went to Ooty by toy train.It was a wonderful journey and also a funny trip.I had a friend on my way and two forigners on my coach.The train entered green places and some small forests.We saw beautiful Ooty flowers and huge trees.It was very cold outside.Me and my friend was very excited of reaching Ooty.On the way we saw so many snakes crawling around and we saw many beautiful waterfalls.We reached hills and stations.After a while the train stopped.It had a problem.Me, my father, my mother and my friend got down to look what had happened.After a while the train started with the sound sssssss.Me and my friend talked and talked.After a few minutes the train stopped for a view.We saw a beautiful stream.when the coach whistled we got in.Then we saw many tea and coffee plants.After some time my friend got down.Then it was fun talking with the twoEnglish tourists.After some hours we reached a wonderful station.That was our stop and we got down.
Hello Jasmin. I felt great reading your 'trip to Ooty.' It was as though I was on the train with you enjoying the trip. You described everything you saw on the trip. That description about snakes crawling all around made my skin crawl. I shuddered. Immediately I felt better when I read about the beautiful waterfall...
ReplyDeleteKeep writing. I want to read more of your stories. I have fallen in love with your writing already.
(P.S. Travelling with you on the train I wanted very much to have an ice-cream. But there was no mention about it in your story. Except for this disappointment, I enjoyed the trip a great deal.)